Detailed line editing would to check the grammar, punctuation and spelling again to try and catch any stray typos or awkward sentence construction that were missed or introduced during redrafting. It would also include another trimming any wordiness to strengthen the voice and ensure clarity. Focus would be more on the line-by-line polishing.
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