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Edit 4 Existing Articles (links included) to Increase Quality of Writing
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  • Posted: Fri, Jun 29, 2012
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The writing of these articles (I did them!) is stiff, and doesn't flow very well. They have a very start-stop-start feel. Hopefully you can transform them into something along the voice of the Economist, New York Times, New Yorker. Basically, well-written in a way so the reader doesn't so much feel they're reading non-fiction but more the chronicling of an interesting event.

I've included the links for each of the 4 articles below, as well the titles I'll use for these rewritten articles. In addition I've also included titles of articles that these 4 rewritten articles will link to. So when you're editing these 4 articles, make sure to include a phrase somewhere that would make sense for linking purposes. For example, article #1, might have a phrase like "Phosphatidylserine may be helpful for ADHD symptoms." This phrase will then link to the indicted article, "Phosphatidylserine and ADHD". With the above said, if the content of the 4 provided articles doesn't lend itself to easily ...

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