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It is entitled "The Angel Chronicles, Book 2" by Amy Lignor. It's a paranormal romance in the young adult genre.
Edits can be made in Word tracking if it is easier for you.
Besides the usual lookout for misspellings, incorrect grammar, missing words, extra words, inconsistencies (proofreading) - the things I'm looking for in this one are:
1) In Book 1, many readers complained about the dialogue sounding too 2012 for a story set in the past. They also thought elements of the Irish brogue sounded forced and fake. Please be on the lookout to change these in Book 2.
2) In Book 1, the overall response from readers was that they were confused. They couldn't keep track of who was who between the angels and their human counterparts. I want to eliminate the confusion as much as possible in Book 2. Emily the angel is Anya in human form. Matt the angel is Drew in human form. And so forth - we want to make this as crystal clear as possible (even though Matt's identity is revealed later o...
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