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Editor Needed for Complex-Worded Paper Being used for a TED Talk
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I synthesize a lot of complex concepts into just a few words making it very hard to read. The paper includes previous research such as "a gartner hype cycle" or the "s-curve of innovation" or such things as the premise for 'the singularity' - which I take for granted and aren't explained thoroughly to the average reader.

I need someone to 'dumb' the article down to 5th grade language so that anyone can read this paper and understand it coherently and absorb what it means. That might mean the paper needs to increase by two pages or more. Completely open to interpretation based on making sure anyone can read this.

I had a previous editor working on the paper who was great, but unfortunately had some personal complications and was not able to continue the job. I have attached the current paper with their comments and my re-comments so that you can see the context of the paper and where it's going. My comments are either in bold and blue or in red with a star ...

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