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Review and correct my english and order of concepts and make this coherent.
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  • Posted: Tue, Nov 20, 2012
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I have a very long signature that I have been working on for my craigslist postings selling computer hardware.

I would like it to be reviewed by a native english speaker and have any mistakes corrected.

I also would like help deciding how to order all the different concepts.

Lastly I would like it to SELL my stuff, so any suggestions on how to better it would be appreciated.

I will probably hire more than one contractor for this job, to get a second opinion.

Please Do NOT contact me using any info from the attachment.
contact me using elance.
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Added 20 NOV 2012, 9:50 AM EST
Very sorry.
should have spell checked this first before uploading it.
I fixed the obvious spelling errors.
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Added 20 NOV 2012, 9:54 AM EST
Here it is also since some are having problems viewing the attachment.



808-561-9729

Unlike other sellers on craigslist, I stand behind my computers and parts with at least 6 months or ...

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