ENGLISH: Editing and proofreading of scientific dissertation
I would need your support to edit a policy analysis on migrants' health policy.
The total content to be edited is of around 4000 words.
I can send you the material on Thursday night and would expect you to kindly send it back by Sunday.
I would like therefore to ask whats' your rate for a such a job?
Sample of my writing:
Bardach developed a framework of analysis that aims at identifying the problem, obtain evidence, identify alternative solutions, develop criteria for improvements, estimate impacts of policy, consider trade-offs and advocate for a chosen policy (Bardach, 2011). Bardach is convinced that "just as policy analysis originates in politics, so it concludes in politics. Political life has two sides: channelling conflict and building community. Policy analysis serves both sides. It channels conflict by showing that some arguments, and their proponents, are in some sense superior to others and deserve to win out. But it helps to build community by marking off potential common ground as well. This common ground is defined by the rules and conventions of rational discourse…[where] conflicts can be recast as dry-as-dust technical disagreements over how much higher a probability Policy A has than Policy B for mitigating Problem P." (Bardach, 2011). This approach, compared to others policy framework has the advantage of dictating a clear list of steps towards policy design and implementation with a reasonable efficiency and with minimum confusion. In addition this approach recognize the political nature of health (Oliver, 2006)
........Analysing policies on groups with specific health needs, the Bardach Framework have been adopted in a study on the 'Charters and choice for students with disabilities in the School District of Philadelphia'. In this study the Bardach Framework allows to depict the difference between policies according to their theoretical public opinion support and the actual problems in implementation related to economic factors........