Need a visionary to help with fine tuning? I teach elements of style, syntax, grammar, and composition to 10 year olds everyday and am also certified to teach middle and high school English classes.
My BA is in English literature and I specialize in editing/proofreading and persuasive speech. I have an eye and brain for concrete, concise writing that is also energizing and beautiful to its reader.
I believe in what you're doing; word-smithing. I would love to help the process.