Please edit the attached for 0.010875 USD/word (including Elance's 8.75%, see min. job price below). Negotiable.
1. Make the English correct, understandable, clear, and more readable.
2. Style: professional, but not over-formal, U.S. English.
3. If you're not clear on what the meaning should be, or it seems factually questionable, ...
Skills: editing, english proofreading, chinese, english, business writing