I have written a 1.5 page product overview (720 words) as a general introduction to a product we are in the midst of developing. I need a professional to edit it and provide the following:
1. Need a new headline
2. Reduce content redundancy.
3. Make arguments more compelling.
4. Simplify and make less technical.
5. Possible reorder or reorganizati...
Skills: copy editing, business writing