Completed manuscript of 61,000 words.
Working title: DETECTIVE FISH & MR. CHANCE
Looking for critique and development notes for next phase of revisions.
Notes to address: Premise/Concept, Plot Structure, Pacing, Characters, Dialogue, and Writing Skills. Plus, overall assessment of manuscript.
Attached is first chapter.
Alan Fish is a...
Skills: creative writing, editing, grammar
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