My advisor wants me to work on the following areas with Chapter 2. I already made some revisions, but I would love extra input.
1. Wordiness. "Don't use 5 words when you can use 3."
2. Repetition. "Avoid using the same words over and over."
3. Avoid using nouns as adjectives. For instance, this advisor hates "literacy practices" because he feels l...
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